Wednesday, February 16, 2005

animal fruit and mineral pt2

frame one: as before (no flash back needed. flashback humour was perfected on the father ted episode 'kicking bishop brennan up the arse').
Bear: (deadpan) my grandma's been dead for months. what you mistake for her involuntary orgasmic convulsions, are merely the worms writhing just inside her skin.

frame two: nothing. absolutely nothing happens. bear is too shocked to say anything else, and pear's reaction is unreadable. he just stares back at bear. granny bear's flesh continues to squirm.
a removals van has now parked outside.

frame three:
pear: ha! i fucked your dead grandma!
(out the window, we see two squirrels unloading a tea chest...)


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now, i'm aware that by having the sickness pervading the entire strip and not just the last panel might be moving away from your vision slightly, thom, but you don't have to draw them. just an idea.

1 Comments:

Blogger laurence said...

did you like how i titled the strip with your conclusion in mind, of course mineral refers to bear's dead grandma..

sick bunch aren't we?

4:16 PM  

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